Enlightener57's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[H.E.L.L]

Good, but not perfect

I really enjoyed this film but having been done in one week, you of couse understand it could use work. Clean up the animating a bit, make the subtitles match the txt, and maybe make this into a sort of series? Pt 2 would be cool. Kepp working on your animation! Youve got a lot of talent and potential :D

[The obstacle course.....]

not bad

i love stick figures and im glad to see them coming back. I know what it feels like yo see ur first and second and third flash reviewed. DONT LET IT GET YOU DOWN! continue doing the best flashed you can and you WILL get better. (there were a few scenes like sliding down the rope and rining uf the hill where he was moving to fast but other than that, it had a good flow to it. GJ!)
-Enlightener57

PirateJenkins responds:

Thanks mr Enlightener your a champ :)

[Schultz's Class: Day 1]

animation was poor, didn't see what your story act

2 for effort. You need more movement for talking and you need to somewhat explain the evil thing he did. A evil rawr in the background doesnt explain much

Nugs responds:

There wasn't an evil thing. On the first day of school, he growled at me. D:

[GunChest Episode 03_02]

hmmm

Odd story line, animation was a little choppy at times and sound half the time didnt match up with the animation. Other than that, pretty good. 8/10 4/5

[Torture & Kill Yoshi v1.1]

meh

Your animating is horrible and so is your art, but i give you a 4/10 for having a few funny ideas

Eltelelel responds:

we have about the same flash scores, you are out of your league to say that my animating was horrible

[Flashticles]

great job

pretty funny, ive actually thought about making a flash thats random and funny, like babies drunk on milk and other funny stuff.

[There She Is!! step3]

fun

Definately one of the most cheerfull things ive seen on NG yet

[Slappy's FBF Practice]

...

Telling us not to judge on art, plot, or anything that makes up a flash then we arnt judging at all. Do tests, spend some time and make a flash, then submit that.

tehslaphappy responds:

....I see. Thanks anyway.

[kirby sprite series (demo]

not bad

how did you import voice sounds into you flash, i can record things but flash cant read them. (i have vista :()

f00db01 responds:

actually a dumb trick tht i used. first i record the WAV file then I use Windows movie maker and fuse the WAV file with a one second silent movie. therefore when you print the movie it'll come as a WMV which is totally flash compatible